Tuesday, October 11, 2011

..But When You Smile at Me, All the Clouds’ll Roll Away

Thanks to genes you’ve met some spills
You’ve stared them down with booze and pills

----Please cast your vote for which of these is the stronger, better epigram----

Revealed in song your heart brings chills
throughout your life you’ve had some spills
You’ve stared them down with booze and pills.

2 comments:

Vera said...

Love this new poem, love the title. It's so sweet and delightful!
The rythm is so wonderful.

ashley said...

The first is the strongest.